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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the
internet
 has put the
news
 on another dimension.
This
 worldwide tool can provide any
information
 we are searching for.
This
 essay will discuss why not all online
information
 is trustworthy.
First
 and foremost, there is a tremendous amount of
information
 available on the
internet
 and
therefore
 many people are victims of scams. Everyone can post
news
, but we need to select what we read before believing what is said. For that, we need to verify the credibility of each website that provides each
information
. Sometimes, there can be a purpose behind fake
news
that is
 published.
For instance
, North Corea's president use the
internet
 to spread the
news
 for a political purpose and it is known as propaganda. Even in
this
 pandemic era, governments use
this
 tool to give
information
 about the death's numbers concerning the Coronavirus and fake them just to calm and comfort their citizens.
Moreover
, in order to read real
news
 people must visit websites of companies that have a strong background
for example
 The Guardian, the New York Times and CNN,
who
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publishing newspapers in the past. These corporates would not publish fictitious
information
 and risk
to lose
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 their fans and daily readers.
Besides
, we all need to have critical thinking toward all the
information
 we see and search on other sites to be convinced of the
news
's trustworthiness. To summarize, the
internet
 has made all the
information
 available with a simple click.
However
, we need to be careful of what we read and not believe in all that we read.
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