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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the
internet
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 has put the
news
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 on another dimension.
This
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 worldwide tool can provide any
information
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 we are searching for.
This
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 essay will discuss why not all online
information
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 is trustworthy.
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 and foremost, there is a tremendous amount of
information
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 available on the
internet
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 and
therefore
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 many people are victims of scams. Everyone can post
news
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, but we need to select what we read before believing what is said. For that, we need to verify the credibility of each website that provides each
information
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. Sometimes, there can be a purpose behind fake
news
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that is
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 published.
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, North Corea's president use the
internet
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 to spread the
news
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 for a political purpose and it is known as propaganda. Even in
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 pandemic era, governments use
this
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 tool to give
information
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 about the death's numbers concerning the Coronavirus and fake them just to calm and comfort their citizens.
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, in order to read real
news
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 people must visit websites of companies that have a strong background
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 The Guardian, the New York Times and CNN,
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were used
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publishing newspapers in the past. These corporates would not publish fictitious
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 and risk
to lose
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 their fans and daily readers.
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, we all need to have critical thinking toward all the
information
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 we see and search on other sites to be convinced of the
news
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's trustworthiness. To summarize, the
internet
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 has made all the
information
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 available with a simple click.
However
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, we need to be careful of what we read and not believe in all that we read.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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