You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with our college
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, let me thank the workers of the
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for their hard work and excellent service. The recent redecoration has made a positive impact on the external appearance of the
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, and I certainly appreciate it.
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, I have noticed that some equipment has not been changed. To be more precise,
last
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Monday I bought broccoli soup during lunchtime, which was a bit cold, but I could not hit it up inasmuch as a microwave was out of order. Many students and I are concerned about
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issue because most prepared meals, which are for a sale, are made early in the morning, and they are kept with only a lid. Undoubtedly, by the afternoon the food is not warm enough to eat. I would really appreciate it if you could replace the old broken microwave with a new one, or if it is possible, provide the
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with two more microwaves in order to speed up the queue. That would be helpful to all students who eat in the college
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. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Angel Smith
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