You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with our college
cafeteria
.
Firstly
, let me thank the workers of the
cafeteria
for their hard work and excellent service. The recent redecoration has made a positive impact on the external appearance of the
cafeteria
, and I certainly appreciate it.
However
, I have noticed that some equipment has not been changed. To be more precise,
last
Monday I bought broccoli soup during lunchtime, which was a bit cold, but I could not hit it up inasmuch as a microwave was out of order. Many students and I are concerned about
this
issue because most prepared meals, which are for a sale, are made early in the morning, and they are kept with only a lid. Undoubtedly, by the afternoon the food is not warm enough to eat. I would really appreciate it if you could replace the old broken microwave with a new one, or if it is possible, provide the
cafeteria
with two more microwaves in order to speed up the queue. That would be helpful to all students who eat in the college
cafeteria
. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Angel Smith
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