Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Duscuss both views and give your opinion.

The chart below illustrates the
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits in five different
cities
of Australia. Now let’s explain the chart information in detail. As you can see in the chart the
percentage
of people who bought fresh
coffee
in all five
cities
is very less as compared to the number of people who bought instant
coffee
or went to the café to drink. Amongst all five
cities
, Sydney has the highest
percentage
of buying fresh
coffee
in the
last
four weeks. after Sydney Melbourne has the highest
percentage
followed by Hobart and the rest two
cities
Brisbane, and Adelaide have the lowest
percentage
. If we talk about the number of people who went to the cafe in the
last
4 weeks
then
Melbourne comes on the top followed by Hobart and Sydney respectively. Now let's compare the trend of buying instant
coffee
in all 5
cities
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