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Band 4.5

Nowadays some people prefer staying single. What is your opinion?

Many
folk
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folks
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 opine that living alone has huge benefits while
others
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 think
otherwise
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 . Having a healthy and sound heart depends on a
person
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's status and success not on ones living status. As human
beings
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,beings
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 public can't live alone because it may cause
of
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many detriments.Though there have some advantages of living single,
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 outweigh them. The following paragraphs are going to provide an overview of why relationships are required to lead a pleasant growth. 
To begin
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 with, human has a
life
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 circle
that is
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 not for an extensive period. In
one
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 entire
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life
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,life
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 they should fulfil their responsibilities to their inheritance as well as every successful man has at least a
person
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 behind
him
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,him
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 whose motivation inspired him to get success. Every day we have to do numerous work , and without
others
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 help it might be impossible sometimes.
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, when we suffer from any disease , we definitely demand
others
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 assistance.
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, to accomplish the responsibilities to family members everyone should have a good relationship with them. Single
life
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 has no merriments, and being alone no
one
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 can mobilize their
life
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 in a flawless way. On other hand, a married
person
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 may share their feelings with their partner ,
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, they can lead a stress-free
life
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.
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 the single public can get enough time for themselves,they can not resolve every problem on their own.
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, sometimes people alone can not make a perfect decision while by consulting with family members they could easily subjugate any situation.
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, conceding a single
life
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 may vandalize
one
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's future because without attachment no
one
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 can lead a
discipline
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disciplined
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 and progressive
life
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.
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, family members can show the right way as they are the very closest
person
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 to
one
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 another,
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, they can infuse their
life
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 with love and affection. To recapitulate, living with
others
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 help people to get a mesmerizing
life
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 ,whereas , single living has a lot of throwbacks.
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, having good relation with the nearest
person
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, neighbour,and relatives will bring happiness and ensure an ethical virtue . Living together strengthen the bonding and boosts
one
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's condition financially .people can enhance their
next
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 generation with a healthy married
life
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.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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