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Discuss the reasons why people define happiness differently and how to obtain happiness?

#people #happiness
For the time being,
happiness
 has always been a ceaseless pursuit of humans.
This
 essay is devoted to analyzing the underlying roots of the difference in the definition of
happiness
 and showing some methods to attain it. It goes without saying that
people
 from different socioeconomic backgrounds may pursue different interests and goals in
life
, which can induce a variation in the way they perceive
happiness
. Specifically, with
people
 living in poverty, their gratifications in
life
 are mainly based on the
fulfillments
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 in accommodation or food supplies while the affluent
one
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 seem to have higher standards of
life
such
 as possessing
high end
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 cars or prohibitively exorbitant pieces of clothing.
Therefore
,
personal
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 background has a great influence on the distinction in the state of
happiness
. Owing to the variations in
happiness
 definition,
people
 can find contentment in numerous tactics.
People
 should be resilient and make an attempt by focusing completely on reaching their goals of
happiness
.
For instance
,
12th grade
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 students need to devote themselves to their desirable university by being diligent to take some mock tests regularly. In that way, they can be at ease and completely satisfied with the final score they receive
instead
 of being depressed when they miss their chances. It is irrefutable that one of the imperative steps to
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contentment is to put an effort
in
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 making
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happiness
 come true. In conclusion, there is no precise definition for
happiness
 since each person has their own living and financial
backgrounds
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,
however
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 I think finding practicable achievement can assist
people
 to acquire their
happiness
 in
life
.
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