At present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disaddvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many countries have a large
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of youths compared to the aged citizens.
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essay strongly agrees with the largest
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of youth and their positive contribution to the economy.
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, the
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contribution is
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discussed to understand their involvements and cons. To initiate with, the contribution of the high
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of young
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will be influenced by the economy positively as it assists to the
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rate of per
capita
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income
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and
GDP
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of a
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.
As a result
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, cheap manufacturing will be fueled.
On the other hand
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, the medical cost of a
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would be the least for the government due to the
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of young
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, who suffer
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diseases compared to the aged
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.
Consequently
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, the per
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income
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of a
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and
GDP
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growth
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will be higher, which is the benefit enjoyed by a
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where the youth
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number
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is high. In Bangladesh,
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, over 70% of the
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are young, which is influencing its economic forecast for the
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15 years of
growth
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in Gross Domestic Product (
GDP
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) and per
capita
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income
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according to the source of the World Bank.
In contrast
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, the
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of the older
population
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helps toward service industries. Most of the countries in the developed world depend on service industries where the
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rate of per
capita
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income
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and
GDP
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are low,
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the per
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income
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is high;
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, the high medical cost of old aged
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and pension are thorny issues for these countries governments as the average life expectancy of the
people
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is a lot higher compared to these young economies. In the United Kingdom,
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, the average lifespan of the
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is over 90 years;
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, the governments’ pension and medical costs are a lot higher. To conclude, the high
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of youth can be a blessing for the
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,
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are at the developing phase.
On the contrary
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, the aged
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consume more service from the government than they produce in my view.
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