Some think that quality art can be made by anyone while others think that it requires special talent and ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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While many people’s opinion is that the qualification of a piece of
art
depends on its creator, others say that it is related to their talents. I believe that
this
is needed the inborn
abilities
to create a qualified piece of
art
.
This
essay intends to examine both sides of the discussion before conducting a conclusion. On
one
hand, many argue that by trying so hard every individual could become an artist and build a qualified artwork.
In other words
, they believe that people are born with the same
abilities
, and
then
by fostering the ability, they could be successful in every field they want.
For example
, an oil painter who is
a
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nimble of painting and paints some elegant pieces of
art
, reach
this
position by working hard. In their view, working on
one
ability could end in mastership, and
this
is achievable by continuous efforts.
On the other hand
, some say that becoming an artist is something that depends on inborn
abilities
. They point out if someone does not have any talents, he could not become a professional in arts.
For instance
, a painting that an untalented person paints is so different from the masters’ paintings. When an artist is talented, his work can be recognizable from the
one
who has not any talent.
This
is approved by that,
although
both have proficiency in painting, the artwork
that is
painted by talented has more sense in it and it might bring out your emotions. In conclusion, it is true that both talented and untalented works have some quality of perspective and balance in the colour and contrast, the emotions that the paintings of talented provoke
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higher than the other
one
. In my view despite the hardworking
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the key role for creating a splendid work of
art
, inborn
abilities
are needed in advance.
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