It is becoming increasingly popular to take a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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process in which everyone
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proper training and
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from studies. In
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way it will destroy the student's ability to learn so taking
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year off from school is a controversial subject.In
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, I will explain the constructive and destructive aspects of the subject.
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new things we need a proper
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particular subject
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30 to 40 minutes. After
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the brain will concentrate on outside
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inevitable feature for
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the more we unfinished the academic task.Apparently, children who are doing known curricular activities during their vacation
time
enhance artistic abilities, people behaviour modification, physical and mental well-being.
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study
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gap negatively influenced students
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of
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study
because learning
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everyday
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illustrate
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Jean Piaget
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child
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mentioned that a student
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academic
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activities during school off
time
for increasing his knowledge gathering. All the habits like reading, listening power common general knowledge, critical thinking and theoretical evaluation improved through
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today
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during their whole day is changed their way of
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dropout
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university
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because of that. In conclusion, education makes everyone a complete person but at the same
time
, we need space between our personal and academic life.
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instance
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whoever involving educational
practice
makes sure that the children get enough
time
off and
also
proper
practice
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