You are going on a short training course at a college in Greeemount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter -explain your situation -describe the accomodation you require -say when you will need it

Dear Mr John, I am writing to you concerning my need for accommodation. I will be attending a short training course at Greenmount, Northern Ireland and as it were, I do not have any place to reside. I was told that students coming for short training are not entitled to a place in the college, as
such
I need your assistance to sort things out. If you don't mind, I would prefer a single-bed accommodation
that is
ensuite, with a chair and a table to the side of the wall.
Also
, seems it's winter already, so a room with a central heating system wouldn't be a bad idea.
In addition
, I would require the room to be nearer to the kitchen and not so far, I wouldn't want to walk too far before and after eating. Since
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I will be starting the program by the 10th of October, I will be needing the residence a week before
this
time,
that
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is on the 3rd of October.
This
will give me enough time to settle down and
also
to get familiar with my environment. I do hope I can get the required assistance from you and settle the housing issue. I would be glad if I can get feedback from you concerning
this
. Thank you and have a wonderful day ahead of you. Yours Sincerely, Rotimi
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