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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
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 competitive era, everyone would like to get
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 so that they feel more enthusiasm to perform well.
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rewards
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 are beneficial to some
students
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 for kind of
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, but not for everyone. Are gifts
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 outweighing punishments for
performance
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? I would agree to the larger extent with
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 statement. My reason for the notion is justified in the ensuing paragraph of the essay. To start with, giving
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 to the individuals often led them to better academic
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 rather than trying to encourage them by giving punishments.
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 is because, if pupils feel that their hard
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 will pay them off by getting present from
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,
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 they would attempt hard to improve their grades than others.
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, the Dilworth
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 in Melbourne started a new scheme for the
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 that top five rankers of each class will be represented in the final convocation as scholars and will be rewarded by the principal of the
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 and surprisingly overall
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 results improved by 48% compared to the previous one.
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, sometimes
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 increase their efficiency in the academic sector just for not being punished by teachers.
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 means that, while
students
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 often felt that if they can perform well just to avoid punishment
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 if
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 a little bit hard
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 they
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 will be rewarded,
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 way they brought motivation.
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, a scientist name skinner developed a reinforcement theory which suggests that people often perform better if their
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 will be rewarded by someone else
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 mentioned that
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 for individuals’
performance
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 do not always
work
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 because
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 creates a competitive atmosphere between peers as everyone wants to get rewarded their
performance
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 and do not want their clique to do better and
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resulted
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 selfishness. To conclude, I firmly support,
students
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 often do well if their
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 is rewarded though it boosts their enthusiasm for better
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 and encourages them by looking at someone else
performance
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 and punishment is not an appropriate way to deal with it.
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