Nowadays，young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, due to the publicity of media, especially we-media, access to

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for young people, who may not set a good example, has increasingly become easier.

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, its negative effects should not be neglected as far as I am concerned. The main reason is that these teenagers who are obsessed with following

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often spend plenty of time and money

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supporting their idols.

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, some of them even fly to other cities to see them in person, which often takes at least 2 days and around $400 on average for their accommodation and tickets for shows.

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, nowadays, not all

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are good at their professions or equipped with high qualities;

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some of them are just shiny commercial products wrapped by capital. In fact, news about their smoking in public or taking drugs is not uncommon, and

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can lead the young, full of curiosity, to imitate them and ruin themselves.

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some positive

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, especially sports ones, who devote themselves to hard and tough train and take part in a wide range of competitions to improve themselves, and

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win honours for themselves and even their countries.

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of famous people in media can spread the information and power that ‘where there is a will, there is a way’. And sometimes fans even follow their favourite

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to do some charity work to assist children living in deprived areas or people suffering from a natural disaster. In conclusion, there are both positive and negative influences on young adults. The importance and priority

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that parents and teachers should educate them carefully and patiently; governments should

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regulate media and capital appropriately to create a good living environment.