Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public transport is most important to everyone because it controls many purposes but now time folks more than need own vehicles. In my opinion, the government should spend money on track rather than harbour I agree with
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statement but as well as railways are important so government spend money on both. On the one hand, athuarety service cash on trams beside than wharf Now time crowd many value harbour because they more prefer to buy personal cars,bike and ETC.other words,population going to
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side about work or meet to relatives he uses on own machines .
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,Japan was sarve about it 73% crowd need own vehicles and it is main papas in
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because individuals most benefit track as well as.
As a result
government according to
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try to more cash in road maintained and make new and big ways.
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, railways are a good way for going long-distance because it is safe .I explain present time whole people benefit harbour and to much rush on road about its problems and it is not secure .
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year my teammates were going to Pune and it is long travel but they were handling the seaport because they were going in the car and they ware face too many problems with traffic
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,Crowd more use wharf and it is increasing accidents on
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but railways in safe . In my conclusion, whole people more than try to purpose public transport it way low loos levels in tracks adoption because now people operation roads.Yet the community use its services according to the position.
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