A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves •Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her •Explain how to apply for the job
Dear John,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing this
letter to inform you details of the job
which I found for you on the Indeed website.
So, basically, this
job
posting is for the front desk cashier at the Firehouse Subs. As you're looking for a part-time job
, so this
position will be best for you because the Company is also
hiring for
two cashiers for a part-time position only. The Change preposition
apply
job
requires six months relevant
experience and no higher studies are needed for that.
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of relevant
Also
, I know that you've got the
effective communication skills as you completed the course earlier related to Correct article usage
apply
this
subject. It might help you a lot to adapt to a new job
easily.
You can apply on their Website by uploading a resume or by filling out an online application form. Their response time is also
very less so you will get the decision in a day or two.
I'm super excited to see you on the job
that you desired.
Best Wishes,
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task achievement
Try to provide a more detailed description of the job responsibilities to give clearer insight into the job role.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that all sentences are fully fleshed out and don't lean too much into brevity.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and friendly, which is suitable for a personal letter to a friend.
coherence and couhesion
The ideas are well-structured, making it easy to follow the flow of the letter.
suitable writing tone
The tone is very friendly and supportive, which is appropriate for a letter of this nature.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite