The three pie charts below show the in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three pie charts below show the in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The pie charts compare the alternations in yearly expenditure by a
school
Use synonyms
in the UK over a 20-year period.
It is clear that
Linking Words
the
school
Use synonyms
spent much more money on teachers' wages than others
while
Linking Words
spending on Resources remained the lowest.
Additionally
Linking Words
, the amount of money spent on other workers' wages decreased throughout the period.
According to
Linking Words
the pie charts, teachers' wages
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
show examples
highest among all categories, accounting for a two-fifth of total expenditure in 1981,
then
Linking Words
end up with a slight increase to 45%
at the end
Linking Words
of 2001.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, other workers' salaries were the
second
Linking Words
-most expenditure aspect of a UK
school
Use synonyms
in 1981 with 28%, but twenty years later experienced a gradual drop to 15%. By 1981,
this
Linking Words
UK
school
Use synonyms
spent just a mere 2% on insurance
and
Correct word choice
which
show examples
rose steadily to 8% in the
next
Linking Words
twenty years.
Similarly
Linking Words
, the proportion of spending on furniture and equipment spending saw a slight rose from 15% to 23%,
while
Linking Words
the equivalent figure for resources drop moderately from 15% to 9% between 1981 to 2001.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: