You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mrs Jean, I am your new neighbour and I writing now to inform you that I am planning for a party

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Saturday in my apartment. So, I am worried about disturbing your comfort time during the weekend.

However

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, I will be very glad to have you in my evening.

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, let me introduce myself to your honour. My name is China Tarhini, I am the new renter of the flat just beside yours. Actually, I am a civil engineer and currently working in a construction company. Basically, I will be living with my husband in the new house for about three years. For

this

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reason, I am organizing an event to celebrate my new apartment. Mainly, the evening will include DJ and sharing drinks.

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, I already put a schedule for various games that could be enjoyable for the majority. Unfortunately, a lot of thunder would be produced during the night, and I am very concerned about every neighbour’s complaint.

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, it is a pleasure to have you in my celebration to know more about each other and to have an amazing time together. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, China Tarhini.

eng.ali.hammoud.26Thu Dec 09 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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