Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

There are many types of

museums

around the world and

people

have been charged for entry in some while others offer free entry. In my opinion,I believe by charging

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admission

fees,

people

can learn the value of

art

and culture and

also

used that fund in order to maintain and restore. Admittedly,giving free access to

museums

is an advantage because it can promote cultural and traditional heritage among society.To be precise,children without income can be able to learn about

art

and tradition and they can admire their existence and their culture.

Secondly

, everyone should have the right to access

art

,

in other words

,

art

should not be a luxury item.

For example

,there are many

people

who are interested in

art

but cannot afford for

admission

fee and

this

can be easily solved by free entry.

On the other hand

,which I agree ,giving free

admission

to

museums

will probably put on finical strain to be precise,the

art

usually is expensive and the running cost for maintaining

museums

and restoration

art

is high, which make a free museum

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run for a long time without the government supports

As a result

,the state has to allocate big sums of the budget which ought to spend on other more crucial sectors like health.

Finally

,

people

usually more value what they paid for rather than

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.By collecting

admission

fee

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fees

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,they will learn how valuable the artwork is. In conclusion,I consider there are more negative impacts than advantages

such

as promoting culture and equality among society.