You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Recently, abortion increased rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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right choice by ending the life of a new creature? Or is it
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best to prevent killing the dreams of his mother for having her personal desires? In the past, humanity used abortion as a tool to hide family shame due to
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pregnancy outside the circle of holy marriage, and it represent
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a solution for most
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couples
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. I think that feticide should not be accepted for health, moral causes. On the
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side, many citizens are demanding their governments to provide a law that protects
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.
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regulation will protect the female from being a victim of sexual relationships where most
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men
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flee from their responsibilities in case of pregnancy.
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, certain minors are not physically prepared to care
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child inside their body. A lot of young pregnant mothers are yearly registered as death cases in many hospitals around the world. On the flip side, some medical facilities are using termination operations for the life of babies as
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of pure profit. In recent times, a number of doctors are accepting
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doing it without considering the health factor, the situation of
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and other circumstances. their aim on
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rich with a simple cold-hearted business.
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, certain people may adopt the undesired children, or they will be sent to social care institutes
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, nurseries, or private schools. In my opinion, nobody should try to terminate permanently the life of their future dependents. In most
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cases
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, these surgeries have a negative impact on the internal body system like blood circulation, levels of hormones and
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heart beats
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restricted by major religious views and human
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organizations. In the Islamic religion,
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, it is forbidden to abort, and
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action is considered
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sin
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which its punishment should be
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hell forever. In conclusion,
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the public
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debating
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subject, and many of them are demanding to be regulated. I believe that all the responsible sectors: hospitals, state departments and parliaments, need to end
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as a crime.
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Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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