Today‘s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Adolescents these days are having more stress than teenagers in the old days. I completely agree with
this
view because they have to
study
hard so that they can enter their dream universities and some teenagers are
also
being under
pressure
due to their parents are forcing them to enrol in specific faculty that they do not have an interest in. Grade performance is extremely important for many
students
since it will determine whether they can apply to university or not.
Therefore
, if they need to have a grade that qualifies to apply to any university they want, they have to
study
almost every day.
This
can make most
students
feel a lot of
pressure
,
for example
, when they compare their grades with other
students
. If the others' grades are better than them, they will begin to worry about their future. The other reason comes from the parents, many of them forced their children to apply to some faculties,
such
as medical or engineering.
This
obviously makes them stressed since those faculties are not the subjects they would love to
study
about them.
In addition
, some
students
who cannot reject their parents' decision and
then
have to
study
those subjects for 4 years or more than that will have a chance to commit suicide if they cannot cope with the
pressure
. In conclusion, I believe that young generations in recent years feel under
pressure
than young generations in the past. Studying is now crucial for every student, if they do not have a good grade, they will not have a qualification to apply to universities. There are
also
some of them being forced to enter the faculty they do not interested in.
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