Nowadays, celebrities earn more money than the politicians do. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or a positive development?

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the income
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of
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is higher than
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. There are many reasons for
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positive one. I will discuss both the reasons and my
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this
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pattern. Today,
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have many ways to earn
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. With the advancement of technology, it is becoming easier to produce movies and
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them through numerous channels. Previously, movies that
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distributed internationally were mainly from English speaking countries. Netflix,
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now allowed movies to be distributed
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worldwide
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world-wide
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worldwide
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, coming from different countries.
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, prior to the rise of
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the internet
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specifically
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the use of social media,
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ads
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that were mainly available in televisions, radios and newspapers, now are available
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on
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facebooks
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Facebook
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,
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Instagram
, snap chat.
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,
celebrities
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with millions of followers gain's traction from companies to use them as promotors of their products. The reason why I see that
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a positive trend is because a majority of the
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that
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politician
receive
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during campaigns usually comes from companies. Companies support politician's
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campaigns
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to pave their way to ensure future policies in favour of their business, occasionally policies that negatively
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society.
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, Enron, the oil and gas company, is known to support one of the US President
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company
and many policies were in support of that sector. It is not to say that all
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are poor and in need of external funding.
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, we should be observant of
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with
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a significant
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amount
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amounts
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of
money
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. In summary, the trend of increased income for
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and overcoming the earnings of
politicians
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is coming from the multiple channels that technology advancement
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generated.
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, I see
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as a positive development, hopefully providing signals for voters to be
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conscious
of
politicians
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who have more
money
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than
celebrities
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, asking the source of income as one of the criteria before choosing them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endorsements
  • revenue streams
  • global presence
  • diversified branding
  • income sources
  • free-market principles
  • market value
  • government budgets
  • public funds
  • public perception
  • value generation
  • bureaucratic
  • consumer spending
  • economic implications
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