Some people think that the best way to solve global environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays environmental issues are increasing more and more and
this
is mainly because of carbon dioxide emission from vehicles. Considering that many are suggesting the rise in the petrol
price
will solve
this
issue. In
this
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I will be discussing why I disagree with
this
statement.
To begin
with, we can not deny that the cardinal reason for many environmental problems is fossil fuels.
Therefore
, by increasing the
price
of oil the use of private
cars
or jets will decline .
Therefore
, air pollution and carbon emission will decrease.
For instance
,the government of New Zealand in 2018 increased the
price
of petrol, so people started using public transportation and walking
instead
of using
cars
.
As a result
air pollution decreased by 40% . Indeed
this
is evidence that
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the
price
of oil will eventually help in environmental issues.
However
, increasing the
price
of oil will lead to an increase in food ,grocery, clothes and other necessary things.
Therefore
,
this
will mainly harm the middle class and poor families.The rich people will not be affected by
this
. And
as a
result
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the poverty rate will increase.
instead
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governments should encourage their citizens to use eco-friendly
cars
that use alternative fuels or produce less harm than
cars
that run on gasoline or diesel .
moreover
, using alternative power sources
such
as solar power wend to produce energy which is widely used in
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countries
such
as
japan
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Japan
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. In conclusion, the rise in the
price
of petrol may help to limit environmental damage but it will cause major harm to the middle class and poor communities .
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