Some people think that the best way to solve global environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays environmental issues are increasing more and more and

this

is mainly because of carbon dioxide emission from vehicles. Considering that many are suggesting the rise in the petrol

price

will solve

this

issue. In

this

essay

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I will be discussing why I disagree with

this

statement.

To begin

with, we can not deny that the cardinal reason for many environmental problems is fossil fuels.

Therefore

, by increasing the

price

of oil the use of private

cars

or jets will decline .

Therefore

, air pollution and carbon emission will decrease.

For instance

,the government of New Zealand in 2018 increased the

price

of petrol, so people started using public transportation and walking

instead

of using

cars

.

As a result

air pollution decreased by 40% . Indeed

this

is evidence that

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the

price

of oil will eventually help in environmental issues.

However

, increasing the

price

of oil will lead to an increase in food ,grocery, clothes and other necessary things.

Therefore

,

this

will mainly harm the middle class and poor families.The rich people will not be affected by

this

. And

as a

result

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the poverty rate will increase.

instead

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governments should encourage their citizens to use eco-friendly

cars

that use alternative fuels or produce less harm than

cars

that run on gasoline or diesel .

moreover

, using alternative power sources

such

as solar power wend to produce energy which is widely used in

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countries

such

as

japan

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Japan

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. In conclusion, the rise in the

price

of petrol may help to limit environmental damage but it will cause major harm to the middle class and poor communities .