Some people participate in extreme and dangerous sports. What can be done to avoid danger? How could these sports be made safer?

Undeniable that every year more and more
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become eager to participate in adventurous
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in spite of their awareness of the risks involved. There are different reasons for
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, but certain
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measures, if individuals followed them, could significantly decline the dangers associated with these
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.
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, one of the prevailing reasons for the popularity of hazardous
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as parachuting, downhill skiing, alpinism and diving is that
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take part in these
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in trying to overcome their phobias and fears.
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, a sense of danger which is felt by one's own skin, extreme speed and sense of superiority over other
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and circumstances give
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individuals an incredible rush of neurotransmitters in their brains which some
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can describe as happiness. These senses are necessary for some
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who want to feel more alive and younger.
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, the most effective measure to decline the dangers of these
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is to use appropriate
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equipment
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as helmets, ropes and special clothing. Before doing the sport, the participants must be sure that their specialized
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kit is functioning properly.
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, the sportsmen must be aware of weather conditions and take them into consideration before starting their exercises.
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, I want to mention the case of Michael Schumacher, a well-known race driver, Formula 1 champion for years, who was injured in an accident in the French Alps in 2013.
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of an encounter with the stone which could not be noticed due to newly-fallen snow Michael had a cranio-brain injury, from the consequences of which he is still being treated, and more than 13 million euros have already been spent on treatment. In conclusion,
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extreme
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still remain the main source of gaining positive feelings and winning their fears for some
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, the dangers associated with these
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have to be significantly reduced by taking proper
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measures.

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