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Some students tend to travel after finishing school and spend time working somewhere instead of going to the university directly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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After completing their school education few students travel to different places and try to explore job opportunities there. Today will discuss both merits and demerits of
this
 trend. On
one
 hand, when pupils start with a new job they get to learn a lot about the real world.
Also
, they get to explore the real opportunities out there at ground level. Graduate and Post Graduate(PG)
studies
 are really expensive nowadays and many people can not afford them. With,
this
 they can start saving for higher education.
For example
, my friend Yash after completing his 12th standard went to his uncle's cafe in Paris and after working there as a waiter for
one
 year, he got money saved up to afford his
first
-semester college fees.
On the other hand
, as there is a gap between their
studies
 it becomes really hard for students to keep up with university assignments and curriculum and may lead to low grades or failure in the course.
Also
 as they start making money they may see higher
studies
 as a burden and may drop the plan to join university. For
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One
 of my cousins had a gap of almost
one
 and a half years after
this
 high school had to drop out as he had lost focus in
studies
 and was not able to clear
this
 subject requirements. In conclusion, university education is of utmost importance as it plays a big role for individuals to climb up the social ladder. Students should explore different jobs and find out which fields suits them the most.
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