You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear

neighbors

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neighbours

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, I want to let you know that I am organizing a party in my apartment at the end of

this

week. I am planning to celebrate

this

event with a musical band, so I am worried about the noise that may happen.

Also

, I will be happy if you can come and enjoy it with me.

First

of all, let me introduce myself: my name is Hassan Tarhini and I am new to the building. I moved to

this

area due to its proximity to my new work.

Additionally

, the relaxing environment here attracted me to buy

this

house since I came from a densely populated city. The party will begin at 8 pm and I will post a notice in the lobby one day before. A variety of dishes will be served from salmon fish ending up

with

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hotdog and chicken.

Although

we are going to enjoy the beautiful songs from a well-known singer, the disturbance that may occur

mad

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made

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me anxious. I want to meet each one of you closely, so your attendance is welcomed. I look forward to seeing all of you attending my celebration. Sincerely, Hassan Tarhini

Submitted by eng.ali.hammoud.26 on Wed Dec 15 2021

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

193 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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