With The Increased Global Demand For Oil And Gas, Undiscovered Areas Of The World Should Be Opened Up To Access More Resources To what extent do you agree?

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The global demand for oil and gas means the urgent need to find alternatives. Considering the incremental rise in the need for gasoline and oil, some people believe that
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unexplored areas of our planet need to be looked into as a way of keeping up with demand. In my opinion, looking for unexplored parts of the earth is a good way to find
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but other options like generating more electric
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need to be prioritised.
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, there are only a few parts of the earth/ocean that have been explored so far and continuing to explore different parts in search of gasoline is a good way to move forward. Many
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in the past had success with it while
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generating a revenue stream by selling it to other
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.
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, the major source of income for some
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in the Middle East is through the sale of Oil.
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, the more we explore, the higher the chances of finding new resources.
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, considering how hard and time taking the exploration can take, alternate ways
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as investing in electric
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cells
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and electricity as an energy source needs to be prioritised. There are plenty of cars already roaming on the roads which are completely electric,
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negating the need for petrol or diesel. Going in
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direction will
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mean that the future is secure without having to worry about unreasonable amounts paid to
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that have
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. The more we invest in electronic
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, the lesser the need/demand for petrol/diesel in future.
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, in my opinion, I believe that exploring new areas in our oceans for new resources is reasonable.
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, investing in
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cells
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is far more time-efficient and will provide options in case of scarcity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
  • dependency
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