the working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

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week should be considered shorter and

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should be longer for employees or not is a continuous one.

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, I personally believe that workers should have a more lengthy weekend. There are some contributing factors that illustrate longer weekends can cause positive consequences

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and foremost reason is that a shorter working week can lead to

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productivity because not only are employees less likely to experience

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and burnout, but

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they will become more motivated when they have a prolonged weekend.

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, they can relax and have a healthier balance between their job and family , leading to improving their mental well-being and

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higher job satisfaction. Take an employee who is

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a father as a salient example of

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, he can spend quality time with his family, resulting in being a fresher worker and a kinder father as well. The second scenario which should be taken into consideration is that reducing work hours can lead to environmental benefits because it can lower pollution levels resulting from factories and industry.

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, it can decrease traffic congestion

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the days individuals are off so they do not have to commute to their workplaces and if they do not use public transportation or their private cars, streets will become less crowded. By way of conclusion, I once again restate my position that decreasing work hours should be taken into account as it results in improving both workers` mental

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and job satisfaction and it can

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have environmental advantages.