The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables represent temperatures and solar
cycle
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in
London
and
Sydney
between Friday to Sunday in the winter season, 2018.
Overall
, the UK is colder than
Sydney
, Australia
while
Sydney
had longer sunlight. Both of the countries had a pretty steady temperature.
However
, in the UK, the coldness had a small fluctuation. On December 28th, they both had the coldest
day
, in
London
temperature hit its minimum point at four-degree Celsius and in
Sydney
the temperature was
17-degree
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17 degrees
Celsius.
Then
two countries started to get warmer on December 29th. Before the
last
day
of the year, in ,
Sydney
the weather peaked at 31 Celsius
while
London
had a slightly colder
day
at 10 degrees Celcius.
Moreover
, there was a huge difference in the sunrise and sunset time between the two countries. Australia had an average of 15 hours of sunlight
while
the UK had only 7 hours a
day
. The sunrise time for
London
and
Sydney
was eight a.m. and five a.m. respectively.
However
, in
London
day
time would be ended five hours faster than in
Sydney
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney, day with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • comparison
  • London
  • Sydney
  • December 2018
  • weekend
  • information
  • data
  • summarise
  • select
  • report
  • features
  • analysis
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