More and more young people use the Internet to socialise. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Over the
last
two or three decades, people have been using the
internet
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socialise
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to
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others
tremendously than ever before. Nowadays,
this
is a quite
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to around the
world
.
However
, I think
this
is a positive
imporvement
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improvement
than negative,
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briefly for the following reasons. On the one hand,
internet
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gives more benefits to us,
hence
, people
are used
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internet
for communicating-purpose,
this
is a cost-less communicating tool like social
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media
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medias
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.
This
type of tool can communicate to
others
freely as well as can be communicated anywhere anyplace
to
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around
teh
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the
world
.
For example
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 95% of the
world
population are using
socialmedias
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social media
social medias
to around the
world
.
In addition
, in
the
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pandemic situation folks can contact
to
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others
by using the
internet
.
On the other hand
,
this
can affect
neagtively
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negatively
among society because today's
popualtion
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population
do not like to talk face-to-face due to using technology. Many youngsters do not talk to their's family members
extremly
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extremely
close because they like to
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the
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close relationship
in
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Facebooks
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or Whatsapp rather than direct talking.
For instance
, in America, youngsters only
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to talk by
socialmedias
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social media
social medias
such
as virtual talk. To conclude, technology gives
more
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benefits to us. Folks
who
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the youngsters like to contact to
others
by using
internet
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because
this
is a cost-less and anywhere, anyplace can communicate is
the
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positive improvement. Adults
do
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not like to talk face-to-face is
the
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negative development.
Therefore
, I think
this
is a positive development than
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negative
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.
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