Should government funding be spent on education and healthcare system? What is your opinion?

There is a controversial notion heating a debate whether the

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should invest public

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in schooling and

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system. I would contend that apart from these public services, the

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should be spent on other needs. Granted, the

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should pour

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into raising the standard of living, and one way to achieve

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is to update facilities in hospitals and institutions. Nowadays, unfortunately, a number of schools and hospitals are becoming dilapidated due to the lack of maintenance and frequent updates.

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, the facilities people work with cannot conduct their tasks with high efficiency and accuracy, or even make errors.

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,

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issue can be unravelled provided that funds are spared

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to take care of these machines.

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, each class should be armed with a top-notch air-conditioning system in order to facilitate students’ learning journey. In short,

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for public services

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as education and medical

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and

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should be put

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on other needs. While the importance of education and

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system

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widely acknowledged, it is unfair that the importance of others is somehow neglected. Take space venturing

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day and age, the Earth is highly polluted and resources are running out. To deal with

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issue, people are exploring space in order to find a new shelter for humankind.

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activity costs a fortune, it plays a vital role in our life.

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, the

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has to take responsibility for implementing projects to discover the universe. In a nutshell, the

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should invest

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into public services like schooling and healthcare.

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, it should serve other purposes like exploration