The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?

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Natural
resources
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of the world are being used too much at an alarming rate.
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can cause a
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of problems. Fortunately, we can have some initiatives to
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address
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issue. There are some matters caused by the waste of natural
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.
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with, it will put
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at the risk of not having enough sources to run our life. As a matter of fact, most of are using vehicles run by petrol which is one of the most natural
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being exploited too much.
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, if
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source decreased, we cannot commute as much as we want, which causes us a
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of
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. In
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of industry, without enough natural
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such
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as coal or oil, a
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of factories cannot operate to produce goods.
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, when we squander these
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, forests
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result
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we will have to confront a
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natural disasters like storms or floods more frequently.
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situation not only has adverse effects on
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but on
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habitat of
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animal
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animals
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as well.
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of trees are being cut down annually which leads to habitat loss or vast extinction of animals around the world.
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preventing people from wasting natural
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is
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a complex task, there are still some measures we can take to address it. One of the approaches is to use friendly
energy
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sources like solar
energy
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instead
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of relying too much on natural
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.
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energy
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supply is both environmentally friendly and affordable;
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; we can reduce pressure on the
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of
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. Another strategy is that the authorities impose
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a heavier
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fine
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on the action of exploiting natural
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illegally. To be more specific, the government should enact more detailed laws about the
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of natural
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so people will know their limited consumption
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natural
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. In conclusion, running out of natural
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poses a devastating impact on both
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of human beings and
environment
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the environment
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. In order to
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this
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matter, it is necessary for all of us to have a priority to using solar
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or be aware of the value of these natural
resources
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with the aim of having wiser choices for using these sources.
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