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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Mike, I am writing to you concerning a computer
course
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 that you are offering to students because I am quite interested in registering for the
course
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. Do you still have space for one more ward? Quite frankly, I must bring to your notice that I haven'
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 had any elementary
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 in
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 before.
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 wasn'
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 because I wasn'
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 interested, on the flip side, I am always excited about computers;
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, I couldn'
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 take on the
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course
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 because I had too much workload at that time. So, having known my situation, I would like to appeal for a special exception for me in order to allow me to register for the
course
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. I know the fear is that I might not be able to cope,
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, I am a fast learner and I can assure you that I will pick up quite fast enough and you won'
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 have anything to worry about.
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, if you are still bothered about how my performance will be,
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 let's wait till the end of the
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 and review the outcome. I am sure you will be impressed. I will be awaiting your feedback
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 my request, and I do hope you will give the consideration required. Thank you and have a lovely day. Yours Faithfully, Rotimi

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