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Plastic shopping bags contributie to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that consumer's waste
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bags
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 is one of the reasons why the land and sea are polluted.
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bags
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 is because of the lack of awareness and it is impossible to clean every land and sea.
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 with, the main reason why I believe that we have to remove
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bags
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 from any supermarket is that the lack of awareness. In fact, not everyone is educated;
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, consumers have different education, environment, etc.
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, most households do not know what is the risk of
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 to the ocean.
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, it is important to create policies that could lessen the effect of
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. To be more realistic, it is crucial for policymakers
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 with reducing the total production of
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. To demonstrate, in the beginning, they should try to control the supply of the supermarket's
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. Another reason why I believe that we have to come with a policy that would ban grocery's
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 is that it is
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 a hard task to clean every part of the earth. Not to mention, the factor of labour
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 is because it would be impossible to find that labours that are willing to do
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 job. Despite the fact, that it will cost a substantial amount of capital to clean lands
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 is because it needs logistics, tools, etc.
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, why not ban
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 shopping
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 from the beginning to avoid
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 conundrum. Singapore,
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, had banned chewy gum from entering the market while allowing the visitors to bring gums;
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, if they throw it on the street they would face a massive fine. To sum up, I completely agree that we have to ban
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bags
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 from supermarkets, groceries, etc. In short, it seems that lawmakers have to construct a policy as soon as possible to avoid collateral damage.

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