Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, all the

countries

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are facing serious environmental issues and people believe that can only be resolved

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internationally by giving little

efforts

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from all the

nations

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. I completely agree with the

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statement and the reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

Firstly

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, every

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nations

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should be aware of the actual cause of the

environment

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issues.

International

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The international

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organization

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organizations

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should make strict rules and regulations which are followed by every

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countries

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very strictly and

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those

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not follow

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should be penalized heavily. Every

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countries

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has many industrial areas,

firms

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, mills and factories where the production house is established which produce

huge

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number of goods and

materials

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by using

variety

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of products and chemicals and due to these reasons environmental causes

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. Manufacturing products

is

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good but maintaining industrial waste

materials

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and chemical carrying out in proper ways is mandatory and

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should keep their observation over

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very carefully.

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, All the developed and undeveloped

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should

be facilitate

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by the government to deal with the huge number of poisoned gases

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out by

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industrial production which spread in the atmosphere and damage the environment. Government should support financially

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the

nations

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and

specially

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for

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the undeveloped

nations

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and provide them

proper

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techniques and treatment to

minimized

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the cause of the issues and waste

materials

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. Developed

nations

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can easily invest in advanced systems and

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at the other side undeveloped

countries

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cannot afford advanced

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and international organizations should

kept

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their eye

over

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this

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. In the conclusion, every country should come together and abide

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rules and regulations made by

the

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international organizations

also

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carrying out industrial waster

materials

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in a proper way can make

this

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world

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better place to live in and

minimized

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the environmental causes.