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Students today can access information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? no less than 250 words

#students #access #information #libraries
It can be said that advancement in technology has opened our world to diverse opportunities
such
 as enabling students to retrieve
information
 from the internet,
thus
,eliminating the usefulness of
libraries
. I completely disagree with
this
 notion and
this
 essay will elaborate on my standpoint in detail. On the one hand,the internet enables scholars to have access to
information
 from around the world without having to travel. It makes learning easy and faster because they can open different e-
libraries
 at the same time and compare reports ,
however
,
this
 comes with a lot of distraction. Nowadays, we have little or no control over online advertisements as one could pop up while carrying out an important task
hence
 deviating ones attention.
This
 is particularly disturbing because for some individuals it may take longer to regain focus.
On the other hand
,
libraries
 were created several centuries ago and will take a really long time to be phased out despite the alternative way of accessing data. Reading in the library does not only allow people to concentrate,it is
also
 a conducive environment for learning and can serve as a meeting place for relaxation as well as sharing
information
 with less distraction.
Additionally
, some of these
libraries
 were built over a hundred years ago,
hence
, serving as a cultural symbol for the people making them impossible to replace. In conclusion, while the internet
serve
Change the verb form
serves
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 several purposes like helping students access
information
 remotely, it cannot replace
libraries
 as they serve other purposes
such
 as meeting centres and heritage sites.
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