Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, underdevelopment of tourism industry, the numbers of people travel abroad
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becoming popular, it is often argued by some that have negative effects on the countries are travelled. I personally believe that have positive effects outweigh some negative issues. On the one and, there are some main benefits of tourists is the foreign currency spend in the country.
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number of employment for local dwellers,
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as providing jobs services about accommodation, restaurants, tours and travels, etc.
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, these changes surely appeal to international visitors, which cause the whole economy and local
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to make profits and increase the final income.
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, another reason for my argument is that tourism helps to raise the popularity of national images.
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, a large number of beautiful pictures will be sent and spread on the Internet to promote the countries’ beauty and attract tourists from all paths of life. So that
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, many developing countries which are expanding tourism are
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considered to be a negative development. Specifically,
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minor changes in tourist attractions can
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put heavy pressure on
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who are in their vicinity, so that, local
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may have to change their lifestyle to keep up with the pace of tourist attraction,
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, discouraging them from following traditional ways of living.
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, expanding tourist industries means less space for other activities and industries
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as farming, industrial areas, etc. To sum up, I totally believe that it is both a pros and cons development. It not only encourages the countries to develop but
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illustrates the national images.
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, it
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has negative effects
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as pressure on local
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and erases the traditional lifestyles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchanges
  • Global connections
  • Tourism boosts
  • Local economy
  • Over-tourism
  • Environmental degradation
  • Landmarks
  • Commodification of culture
  • Authentic cultural expressions
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Tourism infrastructure
  • Public services
  • Disrespect local customs
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