Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. Other people disagree, however, saying that this depends on a child’s circumstances. Consider these opposing views and give your own opinion

People have different views about whether

children

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should own a

pet

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or it only relies on the

circumistances

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circumstances

to look after a

pet

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. While

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some people claim that taking care of a

pet

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has many positive impacts on

children

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, I believe that domestic animals should be owned under some specific conditions. On the one hand, There are a number of root reasons why some are of the opinion that looking after a

pet

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will improve the

children

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mentally.

Fristly

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Firstly

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domestic animals like

dog

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dogs

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or

cat

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cats

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require responsibility from

children

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, because, dogs and cats need

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regular feeding and playing games with

owner

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,

otherwise

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they may become unhappy.

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, pets might be bought to get rid of loneliness.

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, a child who does not have any other siblings will be alone, if his parents do office work and the household chores, and so,

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pet

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reduce

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the feeling of loneliness, while the parents are working.

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, there are,

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,

other

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who express doubts

on

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this

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approach. Their suggestion is that there are many people

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an allergy

for

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to

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animal hair, and if a person relapsed when

approach

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the

pet

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, it would be unnecessary to keep a

pet

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.

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, keeping

animal

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animals

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at home or garden needs many regular items and expenses to meet its requirements which can be

financial

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a financial

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problem for

needy

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family

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families

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.

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, keeping a cat has many regular and single expenses like food, rope for shortening nails, vaccines, and special comb which cannot be paid

by

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these families. In conclusion, after looking at these two opposing points of

views

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, it is felt that it is wrong to impose all

children

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to keep

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a pet

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pet

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pets

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medical and financial reasons.

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, I strongly agree with the

poeple

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people

who are against the obligation of keeping a

pet

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.