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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There are controversial arguments about learning a foreign
language
. Some
people
 argue that learning a foreign
language
 is vital to travel or to work in a foreign country.
However
, some
people
 say that rather than using foreign languages in the workplace or foreign countries, it helps differently in our lives. All these facts will be discussed in detail in the forthcoming paragraph. There is no doubt that learning a foreign
language
 is very vital. Especially, it brings quality for the life. Because
people
 who are capable of doing work in another
language
 gain more opportunities in their occupations.
For example
, in Sri Lanka, fluency and literacy in English have become essential requirements for most of the employees. Especially because English is considered as the international
language
. As well as knowledge in a foreign
language
 helps
people
 to communicate with foreigners.
However
, the aforementioned facts are not the only benefits provided by learning a foreign
language
. Other than that learning a foreign
language
 help to unite different ethnic groups.
For example
 in Sri Lanka, if all
people
 are capable of speaking, writing, read, and communicating in both Sinhala and English most of the religious conflicts can be easily solved. As well as, learning foreign languages help to develop someone's learning skills, and allow one to discover different cultural facts. ,
Eventually
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 l would like to conclude that foreign languages do not only help
people
 to travel or work,
also
 help in a different way. Because learning a foreign
language
 help someone to improve life skills.
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