Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. describe the photograph you sent to the competition. tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown. invite him/her to the exhibition

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Dear Rita, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I'm happy to say to you that one of my photographs has been nominated to be kept on a display of an art exhibition. Let me share the good news with you. Do you remember the picture of women that I have taken in old Mahabalipuram when we went on a trip

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I really loved the artwork because it is very rare to find

such

a piece of art

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is hand-carved.

Moreover

, you know that I'm fond of taking photos of ancient objects.

This

artwork really attracted my attention because it was blended with beautiful colours.

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, my photo would be on display in the local art gallery that will be held in the convention centre on the 24th of January 2022. I want you to be there for sure and I will never take no as an answer. Please accept my invitation and I would love to see you soon. Take care. Miss you. Best wishes, Jeevi.S

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