Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
There is a debate whether an adult or a juvenile should get the same punishment in the
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, policymakers must not equal between prisoners even if they committed serious crimes. To explain, people vary from each other's when it comes mentally, physically, and psychologically. It is not fair for anyone who has any Linking Words
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is the same for juveniles because they are not mature yet; Linking Words
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is to say, that they do not have the ability to decide for themselves.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite