You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. ‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Certainly, determination towards work helps the populace to attain the peaks of success.

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, if the people fail to attain their destination, it means that their dedication was not appropriate. l will partially agree with

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will discuss in the following paragraphs with relevant examples. To commence with, there are some people who are financially strong, for them it does not matter if they fail in the examinations several times because they have enough time as well as money to refill the exams. It proves that they do not have an internal aspiration to complete the task because they have strong monetary funds to practice again.

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when I was taking IELTS coaching there were some rich students who knows before the exam that they will not able to pass that because they do not have strong desire to pass that. It illustrates that their ambition was not enough.

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, when a person has a strong mind to get good marks in examinations but still he will not able to achieve accomplishments because of some natural incidents.

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, one of my bosom friends was very intelligent but during ,exams he was suffering from Covid-19 because of that he was not able to give his best in exams and he failed in 2 tests.

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, along with desire the destiny

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plays a very significant role. To recapitulate, undoubtedly, not only the dedication to accomplishing the herculean tasks is mandatory to get rid of failures but luck

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. ‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Fully explain your ideas

Student should pay the full cost for their study because university education benefit individuals rather than society. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. films stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Wich other types of job should be highly paid?

Many things that used to be done in the home by hand are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

There is a trend of increasing amounts of consumer goods, which leads to environmental problems. What are the reasons for this trend? Give your own opinion and solutions.

You are going on a short training course at a college in Sydney, Australia. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it