ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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World
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poverty
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is a pressing issue that many countries face. All nations are dealing with
poverty
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and they have adopted various methods to find solutions for it.
This
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essay will point out these reasons and provide a simple
explaination
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explanation
to help the poor.
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,
people
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are driven to
poverty
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levels because of
lack
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a lack
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of education. These
underpriviliged
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underprivileged
people
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do not have enough money and cannot afford to pay for school fees. A recent study indicated that about
eighty five
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per cent of children are forced to drop out of secondary schools because their parents do not have the funds for
tution
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tuition
fees.
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, the population are becoming poor because of economic imbalance. The rich are becoming richer and the poor are getting poorer.
Such
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crowd
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a crowd
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can barely manage to get basic necessities
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as food and clothing because they are underpaid and the profits are grabbed by
high class
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high-class
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society.
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, one must take
required
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the required
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actions to deal with these problems. It seems that there is only one way that the poor can be helped and
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if the governing bodies check their respective countries and try to help their
people
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.
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of all, the federation can offer
free
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a free
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education system for
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the low
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low class
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low-class
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community
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communities
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. It is said that when one member of each family is educated, their standard of living improves after a period of time and
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can eradicate
world
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poverty
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.
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of all, the
goverment
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government
should regulate commercial areas by imposing a uni-salary system which means that all employees should be given equal
salary
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salaries
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despite their hierarchy level. In
this
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way,
class
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the class
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system will be removed and there will be zero
poverty
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everywhere. In conclusion, education and
economy
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the economy
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play a major role in every nation that decides whether or not there is
poverty
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.
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, it is the duty of every country to provide aid to
such
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people
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and remove
world
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poverty
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. If there is no
poverty
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, every place would be named a developed zone and the
world
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will become a better place to live in.
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