You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rita, Hope

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letter finds you well. I had enjoyed the

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summer vacation with you and your family. I want to tell you important

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about my community. I read

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about constructing a party club for women that in my town. I came to know about

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refurbishment while I was enjoying a cup of coffee while reading a newspaper. I was so amazed due to

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. Local authorities and charity organisations are involved in constructing it. People in my country are more interested to live in

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a society where women must be treated equally.

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, most of the female members in my city are busy doing their domestic chores, and they don't have time to rejuvenate themselves. I'm more eager to join

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club because I feel that I could do many sports activities and exercises which will keep me healthy. I thought to let you know

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because I think

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appeals to your curiosity. See you soon. Best regards, JS

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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