The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. Do the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

Amongst the many major issues with downsides and plus points, which individuals have to deal with,
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popularity of fast
food
is being certainly considered as one of the most controversial ones. While some
people
fall for the advantages of
this
, there are many others who beg to differ. I mostly argue the disadvantages of
such
an idea. On the one hand, convenience foods are an opportunity to save
the
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time.
That is
to say nowadays
the
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most
of
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people
work and are busy.
For instance
, If all family members work, they
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not
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no
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time
cook
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meals
and these
meals
help
to
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them save time. The
second
intrinsic merit to opt
any
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type of
meals
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, from many points of view, can be a good case in
this
point.
In other words
, family members are not forced to eat
same
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meals
and according to ready
meals
, they can choose the
food
they want.
On the other hand
, from an empirical viewpoint obtaining convenience foods might have a couple of downsides, as well. For one thing, ready foods
price
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are looked at, by many
people
as a demerit.
This
means
,
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fast
food
meals
are being sold highly price by
junk
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the junk
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food
company
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companies
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.
Hence
, the
people
who prefer fast
food
to home
meals
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a lot of money.
Moreover
,
drawbacks
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of
such
a practice but are not limited to money aspects. A great number of human beings is created
obese
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an obese
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nation by
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food
.
For example
, experts say that junk
food
occurs serious health problem and shrink
human
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the human
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life period. Taking both sides into account, I can safely state that prepackage
food
has both advantages and disadvantages.
However
, after
a
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thorough consideration , I have come to
conclusion
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the conclusion
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that the merits can eclipse the advantages.
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