Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes of this? What measures can be international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
With the increasing issues that are brought about by climate change, many people agree that it is enough to just take national precautions to control these environmental
problems
, while
others believe that it is of paramount importance to deal with them on an international scale. I would argue that it is necessary to first control and adjust these issues on a national level because some countries
have a bigger share in this
matter than others.
To begin
with, environmental issues are affecting everyone over the world. However
, in today's world, the existing solutions are mostly national or in collusion with several countries
. For instance
, the agreement made in Paris to reduce CO2 emissions in 2050, which a lot of countries
in Europe and Africa are part of, is a good example of it. These countries
started national-level actions and made plans to reduce CO2 in different sectors. For the Netherlands, it was important to adapt the housing built in the past to green energy sources, because the built environment is 40% responsible for these environmental problems
. Moreover
, the Netherlands made the parking costs much more expensive, pushing people to use other transport like trains. This
is due to
the big advantage of the environment that collective transport brings.
Despite that, these national measurements have a good strategy that countries
can decide where the solution should rise from, there are many people who would argue that global measurements are necessary. Due to
the effect of global warming on an international scale, it may seem logical that small countries
with varied solutions, will not be effective. Everyone working on the same plan,and the same rules will push countries
that may not have any effects on these problems
, to pay the costs of reversing it. For example
, most countries
in Africa. still live in a really sustainable way. The food, housing, and cars are in smaller amounts than in other small countries
in Europe. The economic status of African regions is not too developed, and therefore
not the ones that affected the environment negatively. Moreover
, these countries
may not have enough money to be part of the solutions. In contrast
, these countries
are usually the most suffering from the effects of these environmental problems
. For instance
, the flooding in Libya last
year was due to
climate change. However
, the most pollutant countries
are in Europe and America. Therefore
I do believe that national rules are needed and the only possible way to correctly adjust the core of the problem.
In conclusion, solving the environmental cause needs to be on a national scale, where each country takes responsibility for fixing the issue. The goal is global but needs more in small pieces resolved.Submitted by ouazilhakima010 on
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task response
Clarify the connection between climate change and food demand to ensure the focus is directly addressing the essay topic.
coherence cohesion
Improve clarity by separating ideas into distinct paragraphs, particularly when discussing the national and international measures.
task response
The essay presents a well-structured argument, supporting national measures as a priority in tackling global issues like environmental degradation.
relevant specific examples
Good use of examples, such as the Paris Agreement and the Netherlands' strategies, strengthens the arguments presented.
introduction conclusion
The introduction clearly sets up the main argument, and the conclusion effectively summarizes the points made.
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