Some people belive that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of a bad's person nature. discuss both views and give your opinion.

People

can indulge in criminal

activity

because of poverty, social unrest and problems and

also

the way they are brought up by their parents can determine whether they involve in acts of

crime

or not.The world today is filled with

crime

, and change must happen to eradicate criminal

activity

.

Firstly

I agree that

crime

is a result of social problems and poverty especially in developing countries

such

as Africa, Sri Lanka, Vietnam. The majority of

people

living in these countries do not meet the basic wage rate, earning very little money leaving them with no food and clothing to provide for their families, the government will not look into these matters so what

people

do is start selling drugs and involve more in criminal

activity

leading to high

crime

rates and social unrests.

For example

, in 2016 When Africa's economy was on the verge of collapsing the

crime

rate went up by 20% within the country. ,

Moreover

criminal

activity

can happen according to the person's nature as well, certain head mafia bosses and mobsters teach small children to steal and involve in

crime

so that they get their dirty work done, cultivating bad thoughts and

crime

in a kid's mind is a result of bad nature.

For example

,Bangladesh which is one of the most corrupted countries in the world is well known for mobs and gangs holding children to do criminal

activity

, 65% of Bangladesh robberies are done by kids according to a

crime

survey done in 2016.

Moreover

,in my opinion, Both above-discussed factors are the main reasons for

crime

, other reasons

also

include education backgrounds and how kids are brought up by their parents, A parent

that is

neglecting a child and not bringing him up properly will most likely make him involved in a

crime

or other social unrest activities, Law enforcement officers should tighten their parols and keep an eye on criminal

activity

so that they are bought to justice. And

also

make it a lesson so that

people

will not try to reinvolve in acts of

crime

,

this

can be done through certain prison sentences and other types of democratic punishments. In

conclusion

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peoples' beliefs are true because individuals that are involved in the

crime

have a bad nature and

also

come up from areas of poverty and social unrest,

hence

Police officers and other Law enforcing individuals should minimize

crime

and avoid corruption at all costs.