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Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

#people #home
It is true that many
people
 currently think that they are no longer safe both outside and inside their house.
This
 feeling is caused by some factors, and some solutions can help to allay those fears. There are at least two major reasons why
people
 nowadays have to confront serious risks no matter when they are.
Firstly
, the unemployment and the widening gap between the rich and the poor are crucial factors behind the rising crime rate in many nations,
hence
 citizens have to be watchful all the time even when they stay at home. Vietnam,
for instance
, has recently seen a significant increase in the number of
people
 turning to crimes
such
 as burglary and robbery in order to survive.
Secondly
, when being out on the streets, everyone is aware of the dangers stemming from the dramatic increase in
traffic
.
For example
, the Global status report on road safety 2015 by the World Health Organization showed that around 1.25 million
people
 worldwide die each year
as a result
 of road
traffic
 crashes. To solve these aforementioned problems, some measures should be implemented. The
first
 measure would be to provide more job training programs to help
people
 out of poverty and into employment, so they need to steal from others would be reduced and the public would feel safer.
Additionally
, it is necessary to install surveillance cameras on trains and buses and along main roads because if there is close and regular supervision in
traffic
, everyone who uses the roads will strictly obey
traffic
 laws,
thus
 the frequency of
traffic
 accidents would be reduced in the long-term. In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons why society is unsafe and
people
 are at risk even at home, and steps need to be taken to tackle
this
 problem.
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