Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

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From my point of view, I agree with encouraging youth to have(do) unpaid work to help local communities, but there is a little proportion of
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opinion I don't agree,
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teenagers
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should be required to do
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. Nowadays, the majority of youngsters grow up in the internet environment, which causes them to have fewer opportunities to take part in realistic social activities than before. If they are willing to help local communities to do some daily work, I think they will improve their social abilities and accumulate practical skills,
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as building friendships with other same ages and using office software on computers. These kinds of stuff can be positive effects on their lives. Another point that I want to emphasize is that not all youth should be required for doing
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, there are various activities for
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to utilize their time,
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as advanced learning, physical exercises, or just relaxing with their families during leisure time. What matters is that young
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have their own right to choose what kinds of activities they are enjoyed in. From the view of the other side, what a well-known fact is that the labour costs have become increasingly higher than before while social economics developed. But at the same time, studies show that charities are short of the labour force,
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, the component of old
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in the population of our society becomes bigger and bigger, what is the intractable problem is that young
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are exhausted from their jobs, which causes they do not have enough energies for taking care of their parents and children. If
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could help local charities to take care of the elderly, it will be a powerful positive effect to improve
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social problem. In conclusion, I agree that
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who have abilities and wills can devote themselves to unpaid work to help local communities, it's definitely beneficial to both individual
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and society , and what I will consistently think is that
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can not require all
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to do anything
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not written in the law until they are willing to.
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