In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
In some countries,
people
often show an increased enthusiasm for searching for the history
of their residence. There are plenty of reasons behind this
but different myths associated with the houses and people
’s interests appear to be the significant courses for this
. People
find different methods to search for this
. Among that, this
essay will identify the Municipal Council
and information
gathered from residents nearby as the primary options to research the past.
To begin
with, people
at present, are curious about their new placement of living, how it would look like and especially the background of the building. Because there are certain myths and crime incidents associated with very old buildings, which are unsuitable for living. For example
, research carried out by the University of California by selecting old houses in a particular area of New York City revealed that three houses out of five had a mysterious past. Another reason is that,
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people
are interested in living in a house with a great history
which makes them feel proud. Some people
are keen on history
and they love to have antique stuff surrounded by them. As a consequence
, they are heavily concerned about the background of buildings and they tend to purchase if there is a historical value.
Although
there is an ample amount of resources available to research the history
of buildings, the majority of people
get the information
from the Municipal Council
of a particular city because of the accuracy of the data. For instance
, the Municipal Council
in Melbourne City maintains a fully functional database with all the information
regarding the residents, special incidents, and activities over the years of each and every building and it can be traced back up to 70 years. Another option to search for history
is to ask the neighbours near the residence. Although
it does not seem an appropriate way to collect information
compared with the previous option, ever since people
have been using it. However
, it is necessary to get information
from a group of people
to increase the accuracy of data.
In conclusion, people
are really concerned about the history
of wherever they live because, in some people
, history
is instilled in their blood. As a consequence
, they are keen on exploring it. Some people
are not interested in living in a habitat with a bad history
. Therefore
, before shifting to a new building, they tend to check out the background. People
use various forms of resources to obtain information
regarding history
. Primary sources are the Municipal Council
and asking from residents nearby. Anyway, the most accurate method is taking data from the Municipal Council
database because asking from people
is always associated with a possibility of bias.Submitted by nipunianudhika1111 on
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