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Writing Samples
Band 8

An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain -where did you find this information -why you want to apply this job -what qualification you have -what position you want to apply

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my interest in a temporary job that your company are offering now. I saw the advertisement online popping up
while
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 I was updating my resume on LinkedIn. I am now searching for a temporary job for my work experience because I would like to gain more experience working in an international company.
Moreover
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, it will enhance a chance of practising the English language, and
then
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 I can improve my English skills. I have been working as an administrative officer at an IT company. I am detail-oriented, a good team player and punctual.
In addition
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, I have good commnication skill. I am interested in an office receptionist position, as
this
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 would give me opportunities to communicate with clients. If you would like to have more information, please contact me via phone - 0444444444. Looking forward to hearing from you. Janne Wells

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task response
Task response: You answer all parts, but add a bit more about your skills for this job.
task response
Task response: Use more exact words for your past work and what you can do.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is easy to follow, but some ideas can link more smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Check small grammar and spelling points so the flow is more clear.
task response
Task response: You clearly say where you saw the job and why you want it.
task response
Task response: You state your work, skills, and the position you want.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea, which helps the reader.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • company
  • job
  • work
  • experience
  • careers page
  • found
  • information
  • apply
  • position
  • temporary
  • intern
  • team
  • learn
  • skill
  • study
  • course
  • language
  • computer
  • English
  • resume
  • CV
  • start
  • availability
  • deadline
  • thank you
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