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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Compare and contrast these two views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, we see an argument for which stage of
life
 gives
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 pleasure.
However
, in my opinion, I think teenage
life
 gives more joy. In the following paragraph, I shall discuss both the view and explain why young
life
 is having great happiness.
Firstly
, Looking at childhood, we observe the charm for little things on
children
's faces, and how they are so innocent. At
this
 period of time, they don't even know what is the responsibility and young ones have not even aware about to how to earn money for their needs,
for example
,
children
 are depending on their parents so they do not have to worry about their tuition fees and study materials fees. In support of,
this
 I can say
this
 period of
life
 is better than others.
However
, adulthood
also
 has satisfaction in their
life
 like hanging out with friends and parties at night but they always go through pressure in their minds. They are not as happy not as offspring because elder people have a responsibility and due to
this
 they have pressure to earn money, anxiety and tension to tackle all the situations. A mature person faces a lot of issues in
this
 state of
life
,
for example
, financial issues, finding a good job, etc. and it really bothers them, but
children
 do not have
this
 tension. In conclusion, due to the greater responsibilities in, adulthood they are having less joy in the elder point of
life
 than
children
.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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