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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to University education and that government should make it free-for-all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is considered by certain individuals that the government should make
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 free for all
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 without putting emphasis on their profits. In
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 free
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 is a reality,
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 it helps
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 to increase their life opportunities all over the
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. Nowadays, a lot of young people are trying to get into universities. Mostly, because
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 generation wants to broaden their horizons, and when they study something related to their needs and likes, tend to do things in the best way.
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 from
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 countries have to attend college, because if they don´t,
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 they do not have chances of a successful future. The only inconvenience is that not all of the schools are free of charge, thereby
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 reduces the probability of
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 attending university, without fulfilling their dream of getting a college degree.
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 countries like the USA, college fees are high.
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,
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 is really important, it should be considered as a priority
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 since it helps to stop poverty from rising. Actually, when we take a look at the
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 countries, they have the best
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 programs, and
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, the country´s economy is more stable.
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, in Germany the universities are free, and the quality is amazing. Even if
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 do not want to have a bachelors degree, they can still make a technical career, and the government pays for it, increasing their chances to be economically stable in the future. In conclusion, I totally agree to free
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 and especially at university. It does not matter the financial background of the student. As long as everyone has the same opportunities for
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • access to higher education
  • social equity
  • economic development
  • workforce
  • financial constraints
  • narrow the gap
  • taxpayers
  • financial resources
  • burden
  • limited budget
  • quality of education
  • larger class sizes
  • overburdened facilities
  • decline in quality
  • responsibility
  • dedicated to their studies
  • sense of accountability
  • vocational training
  • apprenticeships
  • diversify educational pathways
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